I am sick.

That's why I postponed our class. My tonsils are swollen. I used to contract in the change of the seasons. So I have had a fever since wednseday. and I cannot speak freely. I felt as if I were a man. because I am making tough voices. yesterday, I stayed in bed whole day. sleeping , eating were what I just did. My boy friend took care of me. he brought me to the hospital and bought a 'kalbitang' which is a beef-rib soup, some fruits for me. Although he have a hot temper I cannot but love him. ^^ Fortunately, I feel better now. I am going to take a rest at this weekend. take care lei~~ Good health is above wealth.

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Happy weekend! ^^

>>Lei<<

That's why I postponed our class.

>>CORRECT.

My tonsils are swollen.

>>CORRECT.

I used to contract in the change of the seasons.

>>My contract expires at the end of the season.

So I have had a fever since wednseday. and I cannot speak freely.

>>I have this fever since Wednesday so I cannot speak freely.

I felt as if I were a man. because I am making tough voices.

>>I felt as if I were a man because my voice is low.

yesterday, I stayed in bed whole day. sleeping , eating were what I

just did.

>>Yesterday, I slept  for the whole day sleeping and eating only.

My boy friend took care of me.

>>CORRECT.

he brought me to the hospital and

bought a 'kalbitang' which is a beef-rib soup, some fruits for me.

>>He brought me to the hospital and bought a “kalbitang”, a beef rib soup, and some fruits for me.

Although he have a hot temper I cannot but love him. ^^

>>Although he is a hot tempered  person, I can’t do anything about that but love him.

Fortunately, I feel better now. I am going to take a rest at this

weekend.

>>Fortunately, I feel better now and I am going to take some more rest this weekend.

take care lei~~

>>Take care Lei!

Good health is above wealth.

>>CORRECT.