I am so sorry^^ cam!! =.=

2015-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Finally, I found that I did not do writing homework at all.. today, I find my writing homework haha I will do my best ^^ sir.. Composition Writing: Do you think people are already conditioned by advertising to think what is beautiful and what is not? Explain your answer and give some examples. here is the answer.. unfortunately, my little, pretty, 5 - year - old baby exactly know who is beautiful or not, watching TV.... HOW SEVERE LIFE IS ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir Hochan!!!
I really missed reading your homework!

You did really great!
I was actually smiling while reading your homework and now I know how lucky and blessed your family to have a father and husband like you...

Take care always my dear and have a great day Sir Hochan.

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Finally, I found that I did not do writing homework at all..
>Finally, I found out that I didn\'t do any of the written homework.
today, I find my writing homework haha
>>I found my written homework today hahaha...
I will do my best ^^ sir..
>>correct
 Composition Writing:
Do you think people are already conditioned by advertising to think what is beautiful and what is not? Explain your answer and give some examples.
>>correct
here is the answer.. 

 >>correct
unfortunately, my little, pretty, 5 - year - old baby exactly know who is beautiful or not, watching TV.... HOW SEVERE LIFE IS ^^

>>Unfortunately, my pretty little 5 years old baby exactly knows who is beautiful or not, through watching TV. HOW SEVERE LIFE IS.

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