I am so sorry^^ cam!! =.=
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Hi there Sir Hochan!!!
I really missed reading your homework!
You did really great!
I was actually smiling while reading your homework and now I know how lucky and blessed your family to have a father and husband like you...
Take care always my dear and have a great day Sir Hochan.
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Finally, I found that I did not do writing homework at all..
>Finally, I found out that I didn\'t do any of the written homework.
today, I find my writing homework haha
>>I found my written homework today hahaha...
I will do my best ^^ sir..
>>correct
Composition Writing:
Do you think people are already conditioned by advertising to think what is beautiful and what is not? Explain your answer and give some examples.
>>correct
here is the answer..
>>correct
unfortunately, my little, pretty, 5 - year - old baby exactly know who is beautiful or not, watching TV.... HOW SEVERE LIFE IS ^^
>>Unfortunately, my pretty little 5 years old baby exactly knows who is beautiful or not, through watching TV. HOW SEVERE LIFE IS.
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