I am sorryT_T

2010-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher! I am really sorry about my absence for a long time. I travelled for some days. Nowadays my feeling is not good. I became lethargic and gloomy,,, I don't know why I feel like that. but I want to tell something my true feeling,,,I know you may not understand me and you became angry for me. I am so sorry,,, I want to take a rest and take a journey until this month. I will start to study next month. Say again, I am sorry,,, See you next month. from.Jinhee

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Oh! Thank you darling for telling me about what happened to you.

I'm very sad that you missed so many of your class sessions but

I understand. I'm not angry. I hope you can rest however, I advise you to call my manager

so your sessions will not be wasted. It will be a good idea if you would put

the classes on hold so you can still take them when you are available. Please call

the manager. I miss you! I pray that I can see you soon.

Love,

Verna

Hello teacher!

>>Correct
I am really sorry about my absence for a long time.

>>Correct
I traveled for some days.

>>Correct
Nowadays my feeling is not good. I became lethargic and gloomy,,,

>>Correct
I don't know why I feel like that. but I want to tell something my true feeling,,,I know you may not understand me and you became angry for me. I am so sorry,,,

>>I don't know why I feel like that but I want to tell you about my true feeling,,,I know you may not understand me and you might be angry to me. I am so sorry,,,
I want to take a rest and take a journey until this month.

>> I want to take a rest and take a journey for this month.
I will start to study next month.

>> Correct
Say again, I am sorry,,,

>> I'm sorry again,,,
See you next month.

>> Correct

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