I am trying to be happy!

2019-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Matt

학생이 쓴 원문

It rained like a shower last night. Today on my way to work, I saw the floor of the street and it was still wet . After the rain, the temperature drops sharply and autum passes quickly. As I get older, I feel that the years are growing faster. I have a job now, but I have been a housewife for about 20years. I am grateful for being able to work. Of course, working at work is stressful, but there is a sense of self-satisfaction and financial leeway. On my payday, I buy something special for my family. For example, pizza, meat, or deliciou food at a market. In addition, I pay anthing just for myself. I am happy to work now.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for sending in your composition. Here are the corrections. I hope I am of good help.
T. Matt
It rained like a shower last night.
>> We had a rain shower last night.
>> We had a light rain last night.
Today on my way to work, I saw the floor of the street and it was still wet .
>>Today, on my way to work, I saw the floor of the street and it was still wet .
After the rain, the temperature drops sharply and autum passes quickly. 
>>After the rain, the temperature drops sharply and autumn passes quickly. 
As I get older, I feel that the years are growing faster.
>>Correct
I have a job now, but I have been a housewife for about 20 years.
>>Correct
I am grateful for being able to work. 
>>Correct
Of course, working at work is stressful, but there is a sense of self-satisfaction and financial leeway. 
>>Correct
On my payday, I buy something special for my family. 
>>Correct
For example, pizza, meat, or deliciou food at a market. 
>>Correct
In addition, I pay anthing just for myself. I am happy to work now.
>>In addition, I pay anything just for myself.
I am happy to work now.
>>Correct

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