I am under stress.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have had some pimples and chilitis since last week.
Maybe the grumpy guy, you know he yell out easily, made me like this.
uh...I'm really hacked off.
If I work together with him for a long time I'll have a lot of pimple
maybe. It is terrible.
Anyway I am going to visit my boyfriend's home to see his parents.
Because he is not here I [이름]der how they are all fine.
I want that we'll feel comfortable and communicate well like family.
oh my~! A movie,I've been waiting for, came out already.
I can't wait to see this movie which is a romantic comedy my favorite
genre.
um...whom do I go with?
Would you join with me? ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi J!! Haha sure I would love to go see a movie with you J. About your pimples. Some people say that the reason why people develop pimples is due to stress and I agree to that. Oh, just try to ignore that grumpy old man. Haha?Have a great time with your boyfriend's family. Take care and enjoy your weekend. See you on Monday girl.
Lei J
I have some pimples and chilitis since last week.
>>correct
Maybe the grumpy guy, you know who yells out easily, made me like this.
>>correct
uh...I'm really hacked off.
>>correct
If I work together with him for a long time I'll have a lot of pimple maybe.
>>If I will be working with him for a long time, maybe I'll have a lot of pimples.
It is terrible.
>>correct
Anyway I am going to visit my boyfriend's home to see his parents.
>>correct
Because he is not here I [이름]der how they are all fine.
>>Because he's not here, I [이름]der how are they doing.
I want that we'll feel comfortable and communicate well like family.
>>I want to comfortable and communicate with them well like my own family.
oh my~! A movie,I've been waiting for, came out already.
>>correct
I can't wait to see this movie it is romantic comedy which is my favorite genre.
>>correct
um...whom do I go with?
>>correct
Would you join with me? ^^
>>correct
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