I am under stress.

2010-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I have had some pimples and chilitis since last week. Maybe the grumpy guy, you know he yell out easily, made me like this. uh...I'm really hacked off. If I work together with him for a long time I'll have a lot of pimple maybe. It is terrible. Anyway I am going to visit my boyfriend's home to see his parents. Because he is not here I [이름]der how they are all fine. I want that we'll feel comfortable and communicate well like family. oh my~! A movie,I've been waiting for, came out already. I can't wait to see this movie which is a romantic comedy my favorite genre. um...whom do I go with? Would you join with me? ^^

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Hi J!! Haha sure I would love to go see a movie with you J. About your pimples. Some people say that the reason why people develop pimples is due to stress and I agree to that. Oh, just try to ignore that grumpy old man. Haha?Have a great time with your boyfriend's family. Take care and enjoy your weekend. See you on Monday girl. Lei J   I have some pimples and chilitis since last week. >>correct Maybe the grumpy guy, you know who yells out easily, made me like this. >>correct uh...I'm really hacked off. >>correct If I work together with him for a long time I'll have a lot of pimple maybe. >>If I will be working with him for a long time, maybe I'll have a lot of pimples. It is terrible. >>correct Anyway I am going to visit my boyfriend's home to see his parents. >>correct Because he is not here I [이름]der how they are all fine. >>Because he's not here, I [이름]der how are they doing. I want that we'll feel comfortable and communicate well like family. >>I want to comfortable and communicate with them well like my own family. oh my~! A movie,I've been waiting for, came out already. >>correct I can't wait to see this movie it is romantic comedy which is my favorite genre. >>correct um...whom do I go with? >>correct Would you join with me? ^^ >>correct

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