i am very happy i could meet you again.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. lei.~
it's a new week and a new day of our life. i thank you for you to be a my teacher. ^ ^ Did you have a happy weekend? for me, i did it. i tried to be busy in last weekend. On saturday, i went to Geo-je to meet my friend. i arrived at Geo-je around 1pm. my friend and i went to have a lunch. we ate spagetti and pizza for our lunch. the restaurant was released recently. so there was many people. especially there was a lot of family teams. so there was many children. i don't dislike children. but because of some children were running and shouting in the restaurant, i feel uneasy and also the waitress was so unskillful and so young. as a word the restaurant was very cofussed.
강사 첨삭
Good morning. lei.~
>>correctit's a new week and a new day of our life.
>>correct
i thank you for you to be a my teacher. ^ ^
>>I am thankful that you’re my teacher
Did you have a happy weekend?
>>correct
for me, i did it.
>>I did have a great weekend.
i tried to be busy in last weekend.
>>I tried to be busy last weekend.
On saturday, i went to Geo-je to meet my friend.
>>Last Staurday, I went to Geo-je to meet my friend.
i arrived at Geo-je around 1pm.
>>I arrived at Geo-je at around 1pm
my friend and i went to have a lunch.
>>me and my friend had a lunch
we ate spagetti and pizza for our lunch.
>>we had spaghetti and pizza for lunch
the restaurant was released recently.
>>The restaurant just opened recently
so there was many people.
>>so there were many people
especially there was a lot of family teams.
>>specially, there were lots of tables for families
so there was many children.
>>so there were many children
i don't dislike children.
>>correct
but because of some children were running and shouting in the restaurant, i feel uneasy
>>But because of the children running around and shouting, I felt uneasy
and also the waitress was so unskillful and so young.
>>correct
as a word the restaurant was very cofussed.
>>I can say that the restaurant was unorganized
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