i am very happy i could meet you again.~

2010-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning. lei.~ it's a new week and a new day of our life. i thank you for you to be a my teacher. ^ ^ Did you have a happy weekend? for me, i did it. i tried to be busy in last weekend. On saturday, i went to Geo-je to meet my friend. i arrived at Geo-je around 1pm. my friend and i went to have a lunch. we ate spagetti and pizza for our lunch. the restaurant was released recently. so there was many people. especially there was a lot of family teams. so there was many children. i don't dislike children. but because of some children were running and shouting in the restaurant, i feel uneasy and also the waitress was so unskillful and so young. as a word the restaurant was very cofussed.

강사 첨삭

Good morning. lei.~ >>correctit's a new week and a new day of our life. >>correct i thank you for you to be a my teacher. ^ ^ >>I am thankful that you’re my teacher Did you have a happy weekend? >>correct for me, i did it. >>I did have a great weekend. i tried to be busy in last weekend. >>I tried to be busy last weekend. On saturday, i went to Geo-je to meet my friend. >>Last Staurday, I went to Geo-je to meet my friend. i arrived at Geo-je around 1pm. >>I arrived at Geo-je at around 1pm my friend and i went to have a lunch. >>me and my friend had a lunch we ate spagetti and pizza for our lunch. >>we had spaghetti and pizza for lunch the restaurant was released recently. >>The restaurant just opened recently so there was many people. >>so there were many people especially there was a lot of family teams. >>specially, there were lots of tables for families so there was many children. >>so there were many children i don't dislike children. >>correct but because of some children were running and shouting in the restaurant, i feel uneasy >>But because of the children running around and shouting, I felt uneasy and also the waitress was so unskillful and so young. >>correct as a word the restaurant was very cofussed. >>I can say that the restaurant was unorganized

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