I am very thank you for my parents, because they give me a lot of brave to me.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very thank you for my parents, because they give me a lot of brave to me. Today, we was have a science class, on my online class. Science class teacher is my class teacher. On science class we have a stamp. When I speach very well, win the game or listen careful to my teacher, I can get that stamp. We learned about element symbols today, and there were a total of 20 element symbols, and the teacher taught us how to memorize them. Teacher asked us to memorize it with a song, but teacher asked me if I could sing a song. I wanted to, but I didn\'t have the courage to step up. But if I do this, teacher said I will give me 3 stamps, so I tool the courage and looked at it. Then I got three stamps for doing well. I was so proud and proud of myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Maria!
I am so proud of you for being courageous today! Show me those stamps tomorrow.
Thanks for sharing your interesting experience today. Tell me about it again in class tomorrow.
By the way, recite the 20 elements as well with me!
See you then.
-T. Donna =)
>> I am very thank you for my parents, because they give me a lot of courage.
Today, we was have a science class, on my online class.
>> Today, we had a science class online.
Science class teacher is my class teacher. On science class we have a stamp.
>> Science class teacher is my class teacher and we have a stamp.
When I speach very well, win the game or listen careful to my teacher, I can get that stamp.
>> When I will deliver a speech very well, I will win the game or when I listen careful to my teacher, I can get that stamp.
We learned about element symbols today, and there were a total of 20 element symbols, and the teacher taught us how to memorize them.
>> We learned about element symbols today and there were a total of 20 element symbols. The teacher taught us how to memorize them.
Teacher asked us to memorize it with a song, but teacher asked me if I could sing a song.
>> Correct!
I wanted to, but I didn\'t have the courage to step up. But if I do this, teacher said I will give me 3 stamps, so I tool the courage and looked at it.
>> I wanted to but I didn\'t have the courage to step up. But if I do this, teacher said she will give me 3 stamps. So I took the courage and looked at it.
Then I got three stamps for doing well. I was so proud and proud of myself.
>> Then I got three stamps for doing it well. I was so proud of myself.
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