I angry for Telecommunication companies.

[home work] Korea Telecom companies cheaper for children. When a child should have the habit of a lot of communication. When children grow up to adults. But the sudden increase of money telecommunications. because, Very expensive communication costs for adults. Telecommunications companies are large companies in South Korea. and earn huge profits. But do not cut down on fees. So, I angry for Telecommunication companies.

  Hi Min,  I뭢 so glad to see your message posted on board. You can do this often so you can see the corrections as well. Here is your composition correction.  Take care, T. Connie   Top of Form Korea Telecom companies cheaper for children. >> Korean Telecom companies are cheaper for children.When a child should have the habit of a lot of communication. >> Children are addicted with lot of communications.When children grow up to adults. >> When children grow up as adults, But the sudden increase of money telecommunications. >> there will be sudden increase to telecommunication fees.because, Very expensive communication costs for adults. >> There is a high communication cost for adults. Telecommunications companies are large companies in South Korea. >> Telecommunication companies are large companies in South Korea.and earn huge profits. >> they earn much profits.But do not cut down on fees. >> however they don뭪 cut down on fees.So, I angry for Telecommunication companies. >> So, I뭢 angry for Telecommunication companies.