I ate dinner with no paying!!

2013-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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A: Hi, Mary. I couldn't saw you at school last Monday. B: Hello, Bob. I didn't come on Monday. I wasn't felt well, so I decided to go to the doctor. A: Oh! was it serious? B: No, the doctor examined me and told me I had the flu. He prescribed some medicine and told me to go home and rest. A: Were you stayed home all day last Monday? B: No, only in the morning. I had to work in the afternoon, and guess what? A: What? B: When a friend drove me home, he crashed his car. He didn't see the red light. A: is anyone get hurt? B: Thank God, nobody did . A: I'm happy to hear that. Well, Mary, I have to rush now. While I listen to your story, I remember that my wife ask me to go to the mechanic to get our car. See you later. Take care. B: You too. Bye. wow teacher, last friday, I was in the office and filled up some documents. At that time my boss is absent because he had a meeting so he had to go business trip. Suddenly My boss returned to our office and He said to us(me and our coworkers).

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^

I had fun checking your composition.

I hope you\'ll get the chance to check them too, later.^^

I would appreciate it a lot.^________^

Anyway, I congratulate you for a job well done!^^

See you soon!^^

~t. Nina~

A: Hi, Mary. I couldn\'t saw you at school last Monday.

>>didn\'t see
B: Hello, Bob. I didn\'t come on Monday. I wasn\'t felt well, so I decided to go to the doctor.

>>Correct!
A: Oh! was it serious?

>>Correct!
B: No, the doctor examined me and told me I had the flu. He prescribed some medicine and told me to go home and rest.

>>Correct!
A: Were you stayed home all day last Monday?

>>Did you stay home all day last Monday?
B: No, only in the morning. I had to work in the afternoon, and guess what?

>>Correct!
A: What?

>>Correct!
B: When a friend drove me home, he crashed his car. He didn\'t see the red light.

>>Correct!
A: is anyone get hurt?

>>Did anyone get hurt?
B: Thank God, nobody did .

>>Correct!
A: I\'m happy to hear that. Well, Mary, I have to rush now. While I listen to your story, I remember that my wife ask me to go to the mechanic to get our car. See you later. Take care.

>>Correct!
B: You too. Bye.

>>Correct!
wow teacher,
last friday, I was in the office and filled up some documents.

>>Correct! [Friday]
At that time my boss is absent because he had a meeting so he had to go
business trip.

>>At that time, my boss was absent because he had a meeting, so he needed to go to/on a business trip.

Suddenly My boss returned to our office and He said to us(me and our coworkers).

>>Suddenly, he came back to our office and informed us [my co-workers and I] about such [the documents].

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