I become a two son's mommy~!!

2011-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Dona

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Monday morning, I felt a little pain. So I went to hospital with my husband. And I gave a birth within 1 hour. So I couldn't take your phone. My second son is very healthy and so cute. So am I. Maybe I will take a lesson on cell phone for 2 weeks. Then I want to hear your voice tomorrow. Byebye

강사 첨삭

Long time no hear, Ma\'am Amy! Congratulations for another bouncing baby boy! I am glad that your son is very healthy and so are you. I am sure that he is very cute as his parents. Well, I would be delighted to hear about it in class and to see you again. Take good care of yourself! I am axcited of hearing this straight from you! See you! ~T. Dona I become a two son\'s mommy~!! >>> I have become a mommy of two sons! Monday morning, I felt a little pain. >>> OK >>> OR: I felt some pain this Monday morning. >>> On Monday morning, I felt some pain.So I went to hospital with my husband. Correct! Or also: >>> So I went to the hospital with my husband.And I gave a birth within 1 hour. >>> Correct! Or also: I gave birth within an hour.So I couldn\'t take your phone. >>> So I couldn\'t take your call.My second son is very healthy and so cute. >>> Correct! So am I. >>> Correct!Maybe I will take a lesson on cell phone for 2 weeks. >>> Maybe I will take my lessons on my cell phone for 2 weeks. Then I want to hear your voice tomorrow. >>> Correct! Or also: The, I want to hear your voice tomorrow.Byebye >>> Bye. >>> OR: Good bye.  

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