I become a two son's mommy~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Monday morning, I felt a little pain.
So I went to hospital with my husband.
And I gave a birth within 1 hour.
So I couldn't take your phone.
My second son is very healthy and so cute. So am I.
Maybe I will take a lesson on cell phone for 2 weeks.
Then I want to hear your voice tomorrow.
Byebye
강사 첨삭
Long time no hear, Ma\'am Amy! Congratulations for another bouncing baby boy! I am glad that your son is very healthy and so are you. I am sure that he is very cute as his parents. Well, I would be delighted to hear about it in class and to see you again. Take good care of yourself! I am axcited of hearing this straight from you! See you!
~T. Dona
I become a two son\'s mommy~!!
>>> I have become a mommy of two sons!
Monday morning, I felt a little pain.
>>> OK
>>> OR: I felt some pain this Monday morning.
>>> On Monday morning, I felt some pain.So I went to hospital with my husband. Correct! Or also:
>>> So I went to the hospital with my husband.And I gave a birth within 1 hour.
>>> Correct! Or also: I gave birth within an hour.So I couldn\'t take your phone.
>>> So I couldn\'t take your call.My second son is very healthy and so cute.
>>> Correct!
So am I.
>>> Correct!Maybe I will take a lesson on cell phone for 2 weeks.
>>> Maybe I will take my lessons on my cell phone for 2 weeks.
Then I want to hear your voice tomorrow.
>>> Correct! Or also: The, I want to hear your voice tomorrow.Byebye
>>> Bye.
>>> OR: Good bye.
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