I began with wonderful morning (2/2)

If there are someone who have mounting fatigue, that person will loss his passion or willing. so he/she never do anything. when we get enough sleep, sleep make our mind fertilized and we feel more healthier than when we don't. we can recharge ourselves through sleeping. In this point, I can say sleeping is worthy. Second, sleep make it possible to make a Dream. Dream reflects our goal. It can be spiritual things or substantial things. but it is true that dream can realize evryone's wish at least in sleeping. and It is amazing that some famous artist are often get an idea or inspiration from dream. Imagination is source of our think power. and dream can improve it. so I need more time to get enough sleep. don't get me wrong. I don't want to sleep forever

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort but still, you need to check on your sentence constructions.

I\'ll see you in class^^

T. Nina^^

If there are someone who have mounting fatigue,

that person will loss his passion or willing.

>>If people lose their passion or will in climbing mountains, they might be in stress.

so he/she never do anything.

>>They won\'t do anything.

when we get enough sleep, sleep make our mind fertilized and we feel more healthier than when we don\'t.

>>When we get enough sleep, our minds will be relaxed and our bodies will be healthier.

we can recharge ourselves through sleeping.

>>We can recharge our body through/by sleeping.

 In this point, I can say sleeping is worthy

>>With this reason, I can say sleeping is worthy.

Second, sleep make it possible to make a Dream.

>>In addition, we can have dreams in our sleep.

Dream reflects our goal.

>>Dreams reflect our goals.

It can be spiritual things or substantial things.

>>They can be spiritual or substantial things.

but it is true that dream can realize evryone\'s wish at least in sleeping. 

>>But dreams can come true even if they are only in our sleep.

and It is amazing that some famous artist are often get an idea or inspiration from dream.

>>It is amazing that some famous artists often get an idea or inspiration from their dreams. 

Imagination is source of our think power.

>>Imagination is a source of our power to think.

and dream can improve it.

>>And it can be improved by our dreams.

so I need more time to get enough sleep. 

>>So, I need more time to get enough sleep.

don\'t get me wrong. I don\'t want to sleep forever

>>Don\'t get me wrong, but I don\'t want to sleep forever.