I believe a privacy makes one\'s personality.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want you to butt in my private life.
Your freetalking time is very good.
I\'d like to have a word with you in private.
Social networking sites are private spaces.
I enjoy my private life when I am alone.
thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for answering your homework. I appreciate your effort. Keep it up! I just want you to be careful with punctuation marks or first letters or sentences must be capitalized.^_^
I believe a privacy makes one\\\'s personality.
>>>I believe privacy makes one\'s personality.
I\'d like to have a word with you in private.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I\'d like to talk you in private.
thanks for reading.
>>>Thanks for reading.
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