I believe god
학생이 쓴 원문
I remember last class I told you my church history....
I don\'t like church people and don\'t know about it\'s right express.
My honesty mind is can\'t believe church worker.
But I have seen very bad big criminal connect with my church main pastor.
And then I can\'t believe church people and I have very strong prejudice.
But I believe god alive with us every where.
I don\'t like only church, I love god and trust
and believe and good.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Me too. I think that there are some pastors that are really bad. But the important thing is that we have a very strong faith with God.
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-Teacher EliseI remember last class I told you my church history....
>> I remember that I told you about my religion history on our last class.
>> I remember that I told you about my religion history on our last class.
I don\'t like church people and don\'t know about it\'s right express.
>> I don\'t like church people and don\'t know whether what they are saying are right.
My honesty mind is can\'t believe church worker.
>> My honest mind doesn\'t believe in church workers.
But I have seen very bad big criminal connect with my church main pastor.
>> I have see a criminal connect with the church\'s main pastor.
And then I can\'t believe church people and I have very strong prejudice.
>> After that, I can\'t believe how these people can actually do that so I have a very strong prejudice.
But I believe god alive with us every where.
>> But I believe that God is with us everyday.
I don\'t like only church, I love god and trust and believe and good.
>> I don\'t like going to church but I love God. I trust and believe in Him.
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