I believe in ___ because ___.
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I believe in my effort because as the saying goes, your effort will never betraied.
>> I believe in making efforts because they will never betray you.
If i try to study english hard,I am rewarded as a result.
>> If I try to study English hard, I will be rewarded.
I believe in good triumphing over the evil.
>> I believe that goo will triumph over evil.
because i think that a good guy will get apropriate reward someday and a bad guy will get apropriate punishiment someday.
>> Good people will get an appropriate reward someday, while bad people will get appropriate punishment someday.
I believe in between man and woman will be a friends because i think that although each other have attraction, this is only friends attraction not mutual attraction.
>> I believe that men and women can be friends because I think that despite feeling physically attracted, the feeling may not be mutual.
I believe in if spend money out the kazoo, make a lot of money because this helps economic growth.
>> I believe in the good things about spending money because it helps the economic growth.
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