I believe in God the head of church.

2019-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I believe in presence of me in the nature of earth. I am born in here and have lived for now. Korea have four seasons. I like rainy seasons because I can rest at my own in that season. And I also like winter because of the same reason. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night.

Keep writing ☺

I believe in presence of me in the nature of earth.
>> I believe in my presence on Earth.

I am born in here and have lived for now.
>> I was born in here and have lived until now.

Korea have four seasons.
>> There are four seasons here in Korea.

I like rainy seasons because I can rest at my own in that season.
>> I like the rainy season because I can rest in that season,

And I also like winter because of the same reason.
>> I also like the winter season because of the same reason.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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