I believe karma
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe karma
My family religion is buddhism.
And I went to a temple when I was young.
So I allways heart past life, superstition etc.
But I effort to live focus on my next life
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I believe karma
>>>I believe in karma.
My family religion is buddhism.
My family religion is buddhism.
>>> My family\'s religion is Buddhism.
So I allways heart past life, superstition etc.
So I allways heart past life, superstition etc.
>>>So, I always heard past lives, superstitions etc.
But I effort to live focus on my next life
But I effort to live focus on my next life
>>> But I exerted efforts to live and focus in my next life.
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