I bet they buy a luxury goods for showing as like they have enough money to buy them
학생이 쓴 원문
many people want to go highest level in the life
and another people would think that the person have a luxury goods is living the life which every people want to
so than some of people buy the luxury goods for showing even they don\'t need it
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. Some people could buy it for the sole purpose of showing off the brand and it is sad that it is one of the things society dictates on people these days. Contentment is the key to being happy and not having luxury goods among our stuff. Maybe we can have a conversation about this in one of our classes. Have a nice evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I bet they buy a luxury goods for showing as like they have enough money to buy them
>> I bet they buy luxury goods to show they have enough money to buy them.
many people want to go highest level in the life
>> Many people want to achieve the highest in life.
and another people would think that the person have a luxury goods is living the life which every people want to
>> And other people would think that people who have luxury goods live a life that every person wants to.
so than some of people buy the luxury goods for showing even they don\'t need it
>> So then some people buy luxury goods to show off even if they do not need it.
I bet they buy a luxury goods for showing as like they have enough money to buy them
>> I bet they buy luxury goods to show they have enough money to buy them.
many people want to go highest level in the life
>> Many people want to achieve the highest in life.
and another people would think that the person have a luxury goods is living the life which every people want to
>> And other people would think that people who have luxury goods live a life that every person wants to.
so than some of people buy the luxury goods for showing even they don\'t need it
>> So then some people buy luxury goods to show off even if they do not need it.
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