I bought a helicopter and didn\'t purchase any of souveir on the famous relic site.
학생이 쓴 원문
My mother always tell me to pray always for the health of mind.
Souvenirs in my room is not existing no more.
My computer is working well.
I often bought some souvenirs on the way of journey to the temple.
It was in my school days.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^
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My mother always tell me to pray always for the health of mind.
>> My mother always tells me to always pray for good health of mind.
Souvenirs in my room is not existing no more.
>> There aren\'t any souvenirs in my room.
My computer is working well.
>> CORRECT
I often bought some souvenirs on the way of journey to the temple.
>> I often buy some souvenirs when I am on my way to the temple.
It was in my school days.
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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