I bought a new smart phone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
yesterday... I lost my phone.....
but Our parents promise \"It\'s okay, We will buy a new phone to you.\".
Today is 11/26
I bought a new smart phone!!!!!!!
my phone is very great phone
This is model of The \'Samsung Galasy S21+ 5G\'!!!!
It is the best phone of the samsung.
I\'m happy~~~~` It is very good~!!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
my phone is very great phone
>>My phone is a very great phone
This is model of The \'Samsung Galasy S21+ 5G\'!!!!
>>This model is the \'Samsung Galasy S21+ 5G\'!!!!
It is the best phone of the samsung.
>>It is the best phone of Samsung.
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