i bought some books

2013-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I bought some books in internet yesterday~! I ordered three books which are related with english. Obama speech, TOEIC test and Radio listening book Even though I have not enough money, I ordered it. once I delay the scheme with excuse, maybe I won't achieve anything. finally I have to pay total 250000\ next month.........(It's not price of books) but i think it was not wasting money but It is investment to me. Q1 - My birthday's .in. May Q2 - She'll be away .at. next week Q3 - The exam is .on. the tenth of December Q4 - I always have dinner with my family .on. Christmas Day Q5 - In Spain, they give each other presents .in. Christmas Eve Q6 - The lecture finished .at. five thirty Q7 - I hate it when people telephone .while. I'm having dinner Q8 - I like to go to a party .at. New Year's Eve Q9 - The term is from September .to. December Q10 - He hasn't worked .since.. he lost his job

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Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for doing your homework tonight! How was the homework? Is it tricky? I hope that you learned something from your homework. You did a nice job! Please go over the corrections I gave you. I am so happy that you are really determined to learn English that is why I am always inspired to go to work.^^ I hope that you will have enough rest tonight. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me during the class. See you tomorrow! Teacher Nina ** Prepositions of Time: at, on, and in We use at to designate specific times.The train is due at 12:15 p.m. We use on to designate days and dates.My brother is coming on Monday.We\'re having a party on the Fourth of July. We use in for nonspecific times during a day, a month, a season, or a year.She likes to jog in the morning.It\'s too cold in winter to run outside.He started the job in 1971.He\'s going to quit in August. ** Prepositions of Place: at, on, and in We use at for specific addresses.Grammar English lives at 55 Boretz Road in Durham. We use on to designate names of streets, avenues, etc.Her house is on Boretz Road. And we use in for the names of land-areas (towns, counties, states, countries, and continents).She lives in Durham.Durham is in Windham County.Windham County is in Connecticut. ** Prepositions of Movement: to and No Preposition We use to in order to express movement toward a place.They were driving to work together.She\'s going to the dentist\'s office this morning. Toward and towards are also helpful prepositions to express movement. These are simply variant spellings of the same word; use whichever sounds better to you.We\'re moving toward the light.This is a big step towards the project\'s completion. With the words home, downtown, uptown, inside, outside, downstairs, upstairs, we use no preposition.Grandma went upstairsGrandpa went home.They both went outside. ** Prepositions of Time: for and since We use for when we measure time (seconds, minutes, hours, days, months, years).He held his breath for seven minutes.She\'s lived there for seven years.The British and Irish have been quarreling for seven centuries. We use since with a specific date or time.He\'s worked here since 1970.She\'s been sitting in the waiting room since two-thirty. Here are my corrections for you: I bought some books in internet yesterday~! >> I bought asome books on the internet yesterday.I ordered three books which are related with english. >> I ordered three books which are related to English. (The word English should be capitalized.)Obama speech, TOEIC test and Radio listening book >> The books I ordered were Obama speech, TOEIC test and Radio listening book.Even though I have not enough money, I ordered it. >> Even though I don\'t have enough money, I ordered it.once I delay the scheme with excuse, maybe I won\'t achieve anything. >> Once I delay my scheme with excuses, I might now achieve anything.finally I have to pay total 250000 next month.........(It\'s not price of books) >> Finally, I have to pay the total amount of two hundred fifty thousand next month and it is not the price of the books.but i think it was not wasting money but It is investment to me.>> I think it is not a waste of money, it is an investment for me.Q1 - My birthday\'s .in. May>> Correct!Q2 - She\'ll be away .at. next week>> until Q3 - The exam is .on. the tenth of December>> Correct!Q4 - I always have dinner with my family .on. Christmas Day>> Correct!Q5 - In Spain, they give each other presents .in. Christmas Eve>> on Q6 - The lecture finished .at. five thirty>> Correct!Q7 - I hate it when people telephone .while. I\'m having dinner>> Correct!Q8 - I like to go to a party .at. New Year\'s Eve>> onQ9 - The term is from September .to. December>> Correct!Q10 - He hasn\'t worked .since.. he lost his job >> Correct!

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