I came home late.

2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi Kris. I attended a long meeting so I was tired but I was happy because I had dinner with my co-workers. I came home late. I was sorry that to my children. I couldn't talk with my children because of late. I will talk with my children tomorrow. Here is my homework. What is your opinion about women in the military? Most Korean men must go to the military. I am sorry about that. Korean men have to stay in the military about for 18 months. So, Korean young men are afraid to go there. However, Korean women don't go to the military but many women want to go there. If my children want to there, I don't agree it because I am afraid too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^Thank you so much for making your homework. ^^Anyway, I would like to say that It is not your fault being a busy mother. Sometimes, you couldn\'ttalk with your children. It has a limit. But, I know that you are doing your job for them. And, I knowthat they understand your situation.Talking about the military service, well, I would say that Korean men are just wasting their time for that. They can\'t do anything because it is a mandatory since your country is at war.Hopefully there will be peace between North and South Korea.Have a great day ahead, [이름] and please study the following corrections, okay.See you! ^^~~ Teacher KrisI attended a long meeting so I was tired but I was happy because I had dinner with my co-workers.>> I attended a long a meeting so I was tired but, I was happy because I had dinner with my co-workers.I came home late. I was sorry that to my children.>> I came home late. I felt sorry to my children.I couldn\'t talk with my children because of late.>> I couldn\'t talk to my children because I was late.I will talk with my children tomorrow.>> I will talk to my children tomorrow.Most Korean men must go to the military.>> CorrectI am sorry about that.>> I feel sorry about that.Korean men have to stay in the military about for 18 months.>> Korean men must render their service in the military for about 18 months.So, Korean young men are afraid to go there.>> So, most Korean men are afraid to o there.However, Korean women don\'t go to the military but many women want to go there.>> However, Korean women are not required to go in the military but, most of them want to go there.If my children want to there, I don\'t agree it because I am afraid too.>> If my children will be forced to go there, I won\'t allow it because I am afraid.

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