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2023-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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Music makes me joyful. So, I usually listen music while exercising. Exercise with exciting music is much easier. However, I don\'t do somehing while listening to music except exercise. I tried to solve math problems with listening music, the result was terrible. :( It is also the same when cooking. Cooking contains hazard. So, when I cook, I focus on cooking.

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Hello, [이름] U!

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-T.Jhozel

Music makes me joyful.

>> Correct!
>> OR: Music makes me happy.

So, I usually listen music while exercising.

>> Correct!
>> OR: So I usually listen to music while working out.

Exercise with exciting music is much easier.

>> Correct!
>>OR: Exercising with exciting music is much more enjoyable.

However, I don\'t do somehing while listening to music except exercise.

>> However, I don\'t do anything while listening to music except exercise.

I tried to solve math problems with listening music, the result was terrible. :(

>> I tried to solve math problems while listening to music, but the results were terrible.

It is also the same when cooking. Cooking contains hazard. So, when I cook, I focus on cooking.

>> It\'s the same with cooking, there are risks involved, so when I cook, I concentrate on it.

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