I can agree animal exhibition in zoo with specific condition.
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo
Well, I can not find the sentence after \"A zoo\".
I think that this question might be \" Do you agreed that exhibit animal in the zoo?\"
I would like to say about this question \"yes I agree\" with specific conditions. Specific conditions are that zoo management should keep in mind they should protect animals and animals are one of the family of the earth.
For example \"Rhinoceros\" is one of the rare animals on Earth. I think that zoo should keep very carefully about this animal, and they should contribute finding way of how to keep that kinds of animals on Earth. On this condition I can agree animal exhibition in zoo.
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Well, I can not find the sentence after \"A zoo\".
>>> Oh sir that must be \"A zoo has no useful purpose\"
I think that this question might be \" Do you agreed that exhibit animal in the zoo?\"
I think that this question might be \" Do you agreed that exhibit animal in the zoo?\"
>>> I think this question might be \" Do you agree with animal exhibition in the zoo?\"
I would like to say about this question \"yes I agree\" with specific conditions.
I would like to say about this question \"yes I agree\" with specific conditions.
>>> CORRECT
Specific conditions are that zoo management should keep in mind they should protect animals and animals are one of the family of the earth.
>>> Specific conditions are that zoo management should keep in mind that they should protect animals for animals are important creatures on the earth.
For example \"Rhinoceros\" is one of the rare animals on Earth.
For example \"Rhinoceros\" is one of the rare animals on Earth.
>>> CORRECT
I think that zoo should keep very carefully about this animal, and they should contribute finding way of how to keep that kinds of animals on Earth.
>>> I think that zoo should keep animals carefully, and they should contribute finding ways on how to keep that kinds of animals on Earth.
On this condition I can agree animal exhibition in zoo.
>>> With this conditions, I agree with animal exhibitions in the zoo.
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