I can do small exercises in my room to make my body healthier.

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I always want to keep my body healthier. I am doing some working out to keep my body healthier. Walking 10,000 steps is talked that is the best way to maintain the good condition of our body. Whenever I wake up in the morning I weigh my weight at scale which checks my body condition. Studying english is also a good way to keep a good mind. I think so. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great time ☺

I always want to keep my body healthier.

>> I always want to keep my body healthy.

I am doing some working out to keep my body healthier.

>> CORRECT

Walking 10,000 steps is talked that is the best way to maintain the good condition of our body.

>> Walking 10,000 steps is said to be the best way to maintain the good condition of our body.

Whenever I wake up in the morning I weigh my weight at scale which checks my body condition.

>> Whenever I wake up in the morning, I weigh using the weighing scale which checks my body condition.

Studying english is also a good way to keep a good mind.

>> Studying English is also a good way to keep a good mind.

I think so.

>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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