I can not stop doing homework! because it makes me fun! Ha ha!

2012-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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1.begun 2. begun 3. broke 4.broken 5.did There was a trifle happening today, that is...a woman came to me while i was doing work hard. And she told me "Can you ask them about what should i do for taking a class in ski school that is a program of our resort. In details, as its name indicate, we provide some patrons who want to pay for his or her ski education class with special time. However, there weren't workers who can speak English and understand her words at that time. So she didn't have any choice but to come to me again while remembering to meet me when she came to our office to ask just about how to borrow snowboard-equipment at first. Therefore, I could not help following her to help her. Finally, I went to ski school with her and explain the officer in the school about her situation to the utmost. She went back to her condominium while telling me "Thanks". Although she said somthing too fast for to i got understand perfectly, i was really happy to help her with lack of abi

강사 첨삭

Hi there cute [이름]!^^ Thanks for sharing your experience today! ^^ WOW! What a great help you have there! I\'m so sure the client was so happy to have you there because you were able to help her with her concern. I think that\'s how important English is. You can overcome the barriers between you and the foreign people. Plus - you received a recognition by those \"Thank you\'s\" from them. Good job! ^^ Please continue your composition, [이름]. I think you are not yet done. Haha. Anyway, you have very few corrections. Please go over them. :D  Catch you later, [이름]! ~ Teacher Alice There was a trifle happening today, that is...a woman came to me while i was doing work hard. >> There was a tripple happening today. That is...a woman came to me while I was working hard on something. And she told me \"Can you ask them about what should i do for taking a class in ski school that is a program of our resort. >> And she asked me, \"Can you ask them about what I should do for taking a class in ski school?\" (which is a program of our resort) In details, as its name indicate, we provide some patrons who want to pay for his or her ski education class with special time. >> In details, as its name indicates, we provide some patrons (or clients) who want to pay for his or her ski education class with special time. However, there weren\'t workers who can speak English and understand her words at that time. >> Correct! So she didn\'t have any choice but to come to me again while remembering to meet me when she came to our office to ask just about how to borrow snowboard-equipment at first. >> So she didn\'t have any choice but to come to me again while remembering to meet me when she first came to our office to ask just about how to borrow snowboard-equipment. Therefore, I could not help following her to help her. >> Correct! Finally, I went to ski school with her and explain the officer in the school about her situation to the utmost. >> Finally, I went to ski school with her and explained the officer in the school about her situation to the utmost. She went back to her condominium while telling me \"Thanks\". >> Correct! Although she said somthing too fast for to i got understand perfectly, i was really happy to help her with lack of abi >> Although she said something too fast for I got to understand perfectly, I was really happy to help her with lack of abi . . .

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