I can overcome a nasty cold

2010-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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A few days ago, I met my friends because of the birthday party. we drank a lot of coffee and beverage together. but one girl got a clod among us. we could't know this. even we used forks together. eventually, I got a cold from her. Owing to fever, today my condition is worse than before I really worry aout my middle examination. Because of this, I can't concentrate major. Moreover I have only 2weeks till exam period. so I have to overcom this perfectly.

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Hi Ruffy! I am so sorry to hear about your colds. Please have some rest and don’t stress yourself. What I did when I got sick was, I drunk a lot of ginger tea. One of my students recommended that. Try it, and hope it will work. Hope you will be feeling better tomorrow. Goodluck with your exams too. See you Ruffy!! Get well soon!! Lei J     I can overcome a nasty cold >>correct A few days ago, I met my friends because of the birthday party. >>A few days ago, I went to a birthday party and met my friends.we drank a lot of coffee and beverage together. >>we drank a lot of coffe and different kinds of beverages.but one girl got a clod among us. >>But one of the girls in the party has a cold.we could't know this. even we used forks together. >>we had no idea she was having a bad cold, so we used the same fork.eventually, I got a cold from her. >>evntually, because of her I caught a cold.Owing to fever, today my condition is worse than before >>Today my condition is getting worse, I now have a fever. I really worry aout my middle examination. >>And because of this I am worried about my upcomming middle s[이름]ol examination.Because of this, I can't concentrate major. >>I can't even concentrate reviewing my major subjects.Moreover I have only 2weeks till exam period. >>Moreover, I only have two weeks left to review before the test.so I have to overcom this perfectly. >>so I have to overcome this sickness perfectly.

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