I can remember one scene
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was very little girl, I was very scared about to nightmare.
One day, I can\'t remember perfectly content of a dream.
But especially I can remember one scene.
I remember a vampire biting my mother\'s neck
This is my worst bad dream my whole life.
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When I was very little girl, I was very scared about to nightmare.
>> When I was very little girl, I was very scared of nightmares.
One day, I can\'t remember perfectly content of a dream.
>> One day, I had a dream but I don\'t remember it perfectly.
But especially I can remember one scene.
>> I only remember one scene.
I remember a vampire biting my mother\'s neck.
>> I remembered that a vampire was biting my mothers neck.
This is my worst bad dream my whole life.
>> This is the worst dream I\'ve ever had in my life.
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