I can say greatest asset of my company is camera module.
학생이 쓴 원문
> What\'s the greatest asset of your company that you can be proud of?
If your question is related with products of our company I can say it it camera module. You know, I-phone from Apple is famous mobile phone all of the world. In the I-phone there is a camera module. And this is produced by our company. So our company employee can feel proud of it. Because I-phone is the most famous and best selling item recently. Due to this camera module Our company\'s reputation has been getting higher. And our company stock also has been getting higher accordingly.
So I can say greatest asset of my company is camera module.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. I-phone\'s camera really has good quality. The image resolution is really good even if you zoom in the pictures.
- T. Beth
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If your question is related with products of our company I can say it it camera module. >>> If your question is related with products of our company, I can say it is the camera module.
You know, I-phone from Apple is famous mobile phone all of the world.
>>> As you may know, I-phone from Apple is a famous mobile phone all over the world.
In the I-phone there is a camera module.
>>> OR: The I-phone has a camera module.
And this is produced by our company.
>>> correct
So our company employee can feel proud of it. Because I-phone is the most famous and best selling item recently.
>>> correct
>>> So our company employees can feel proud of it because I-phone is the most famous and best selling item recently.
Due to this camera module Our company\'s reputation has been getting higher.
>>> Due to this camera module, our company\'s reputation has been getting better.
And our company stock also has been getting higher accordingly.
>>> OR: And our company stock also has been increasing accordingly.
So I can say greatest asset of my company is camera module.
>>> So I can say that the greatest asset of my company is the camera module.
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