I can see anything in everywhere that resulted from the science.

Hi Mr [이름]!

You do have a knack in expressing your thoughts.

It would be good if you could maintain this or even improve on it.

Please take note of the grammar errors below.

Make sure not to repeat the same mistakes.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Science affect greatly to our life.

>> Science affects our lives greatly.
I sometimes imagine what the future would be..

>> I sometimes imagine what the future would be.
I have like the science subject fairly among the others in school.

>> When I was in school, I liked science more than the other subjects.
What do you expect if science will prosperous in the future?

>> What do you expect if science will prosper in the future?
I want to ask it to you.

>> I want to ask that question.
The world is more narrow if science will lasted than we are now.because of it\'s communication skills in network.

>> The world will be smaller because of some development in communication.
I like the computer.

>> I like computers.

It has been with me from my younger times.

>> I have had my computer since I was young.
Even now, I like to do the computer..

>> Even now, I still like using computers.

It\'s stronger than old times though.

>> The computers now are more durable than they were before.