I can show you my love~ ^-^
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you show your love for your country, South Korea or how do you show your patriotism?
I can draw my national flag, or sing 애국가, a Korean national anthem.
And I can sing national anthem with my friends.
I also can write a poem about Korea.
And I can draw Korean Cultural Heritage.
There\'s lots of thing I can do!
강사 첨삭
Hello again, [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework! Happy Independence Day once again!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you show your love for your country, South Korea or how do you show your patriotism?
I can draw my national flag, or sing 애국가, a Korean national anthem.
>> I can draw my national flag or sing 애국가, the Korean national anthem.
And I can sing national anthem with my friends.
>> And I can sing the national anthem with my friends.
I also can write a poem about Korea. And I can draw Korean Cultural Heritage.
>> I also can write a poem about Korea and can draw Korean Cultural Heritage.
There\'s lots of thing I can do!
>> There are lots of things I can do!
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