I can\'t choose it:)
학생이 쓴 원문
My best memory during the study, is.. I can\'t choose it.
Everyday everytime is my best memory.
When I first time join to the class, honestly I was afraid and little bit of scary.
Because I have afraid to meet at stranger and foreigner.
But when I first saw Elise teacher, she was so kind and nicely.
I was feel so comfortable joined to class.
Now it\'s feels like my best friends.
Everyday l am waiting my class.
She is my best teaacher and friend:)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Aww. You made me teary-eyed. Reading that was very heart warming. I feel the same way. I am always looking forward to having the class with you and I can\'t wait to hear more adventures about your life. <3
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
My best memory during the study, is.. I can\'t choose it.
>> I can\'t choose what\'s the best memory I have when I was studying.
Everyday everytime is my best memory.
>> Everyday and every time was my best memory.
When I first time join to the class, honestly I was afraid and little bit of scary.
>> During my first time joining the class, I was honestly afraid and scared.
Because I have afraid to meet at stranger and foreigner.
>> It is because I was afraid of meeting strangers and foreigners.
But when I first saw Elise teacher, she was so kind and nicely.
>> But when I first saw Teacher Elise, she was so kind and nice.
I was feel so comfortable joined to class.
>> I felt so comfortable joining the class.
Now it\'s feels like my best friends.
>>Now it feels like she\'s my bestfriend.
Everyday l am waiting my class.
>> Everyday, I am looking forward to our class.
She is my best teaacher and friend:)
>> She is the best teacher and friend.
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