I cancled yesterday's class.

Hi~~ I'm [이름]. I cancled yesterday's class because yesterday was my friend's birthday. I'm so sorry that I didn't have class but I had a great time. We drunk, ate and went to a night-club also we watched the sexy dance competition in the night-club. I was surprised becuase of the sexy dance but we had a great time. I went to the bed at the break of the day so I'm very tired now. See you tonight, teacher, bye~~~~ p.s. Can you make up the yesterday's class to another time? Thank you.

Hi [이름]! I am very happy to know that you had a great time with your friend. About your request, I am very sorry but I can’t reschedule the cancelled class last night because we are not allowed to.  If ever you’d like to postpone our class some other time, you can actually call our Korean manager for our class to be rescheduled. Anyway, I have included here some corrections for your improvement. See you in few hours, [이름]! -T. Louise   Hi~~ >> Correct. >> Hi!I'm [이름]. >> Correct.I cancled yesterday's class because yesterday was my friend's birthday. >> I cancelled our class yesterday because it was my friend’s birthday.I'm so sorry that I didn't have class but I had a great time. >> Correct.We drunk, ate and went to a night-club also we watched the sexy dance competition in the night-club. >> We had some drinking session, we ate and went to a night club. We watched a sexy dance competition there.I was surprised becuase of the sexy dance but we had a great time. >> I was surprised of the sexy dance but we really had a great time.I went to the bed at the break of the day so I'm very tired now. >> I went to bed at dawn, so I’m very tired now.See you tonight, teacher, bye~~~~ >>  Correct. >> See you tonight, teacher. Bye!p.s. Can you make up the yesterday's class to another time? >> Correct. >> P.S. Can you make up the yesterday's class to another time?Thank you. >> Thank you.