I carry with my cellphone when l leave the house
학생이 쓴 원문
I have to take my cellphone when i leave the house.
If i didn’t take my cellphone, i couldn’t study about listening English piles , watching a movies or searching the in internet.
When l go to school or hang out with my friends , l need to travel for more than hour.
While i taking a bus or subway,
I couldn’t resist boredom.
If i take my cellphone , Time goes by quickly
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I have to take my cellphone when i leave the house.
If i didn’t take my cellphone, i couldn’t study about listening English piles , watching a movies or searching the in internet.
When l go to school or hang out with my friends , l need to travel for more than hour.
While i taking a bus or subway,
I couldn’t resist boredom.
If i take my cellphone , Time goes by quickly
If i didn’t take my cellphone, i couldn’t study about listening English piles , watching a movies or searching the in internet.
When l go to school or hang out with my friends , l need to travel for more than hour.
While i taking a bus or subway,
I couldn’t resist boredom.
If i take my cellphone , Time goes by quickly
>> The thing that I always take when I leave the house is my cellphone.
If I don\'t take my cellphone with me then I couldn\'t study English, watch movies and search on the internet.
When I go to school or hang out with my friends, I need to travel for more than one hour.
I use my cellphone for me not feel boredom while I\'m taking a bus or subway.
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