I catched a cold:(

2017-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, teacher~! I catched a cold so i felt really sick today Actully i went to downtown with my friends We went shopping for 3hours maybe Then i bought some clothes We ate tteokbokki do you know this food? It's very spicy food maybe you know it!! Tteokbokki was too spicy to it that i have to eat ice Then the ice maked me catch a cold I think i feel tired everyday i am so sorry:( But you have to understand me i am very busy everyday See you on the class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby thank you so much for the wonderful class tonight...

I really appreciate how much effort and time you make to have class with me always...

Please get some rest baby okay?

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello, teacher~!

>correct
 I catched a cold so i felt really sick today

>I caught a cold.
 Actully i went to downtown with my friends

>Actually, I went downtown with my friends.
 We went shopping for 3hours maybe

>correct
 Then i bought some clothes

>correct
 We ate tteokbokki do you know this food?

>correct
 It\'s very spicy food maybe you know it!!

>correct
 Tteokbokki was too spicy to it that i have to eat ice

>It was too spicy that I also had to eat ice.
 Then the ice maked me catch a cold 

>Then the ice made me catch some cold.
 I think i feel tired everyday i am so sorry:(

>correct
 But you have to understand me i am very busy everyday

>correct
 See you on the class~!

>See you in class!


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