I catched a cold:(
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Hi baby thank you so much for the wonderful class tonight...
I really appreciate how much effort and time you make to have class with me always...
Please get some rest baby okay?
Take care always and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello, teacher~!
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I catched a cold so i felt really sick today
>I caught a cold.
Actully i went to downtown with my friends
>Actually, I went downtown with my friends.
We went shopping for 3hours maybe
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Then i bought some clothes
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We ate tteokbokki do you know this food?
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It\'s very spicy food maybe you know it!!
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Tteokbokki was too spicy to it that i have to eat ice
>It was too spicy that I also had to eat ice.
Then the ice maked me catch a cold
>Then the ice made me catch some cold.
I think i feel tired everyday i am so sorry:(
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But you have to understand me i am very busy everyday
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See you on the class~!
>See you in class!
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