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2014-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In the morning of saturday, I gave Carolyn morning call. We met at 11 O'clock,starting to go carcenter. Mechanic who own the repair shop remember me, because I visited this place lontime ago. He kindly welcomed us. While he checking our car, we went to shopping. Sunday is Carolyn's birthday So i decided to buy a present which she want to have. She talked to me that she want to have big pillow. After shopping, We back to the repair shop, Mechanic said there were many spot to check and repair. So I need to change additional part. Totally, I spent twenty hundred thirty thousand won(230,000) which was almost the same price with our 2-month class. In the evening, We met our friend who finished his military period in this year. We treat him a dinner and ice cream. It was very good time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning and happy Monday to you.

Thank you for sharing this with me. Sounds fun!^^ You truly had a great time with your friends.^^

I hope you will have a wonderful week then.

I do have some minor corrections and I hope you consider them.

Talk to you later.

Teacher Nina^^


In the morning of saturday, I gave Carolyn morning call.

>> Last Saturday morning, I gave Carolyn a call.

We met at 11 O\'clock,starting to go carcenter.

>> We met at 11 o\'clock and went to the car car repair shop.

Mechanic who own the repair shop remember me, because I visited this place lontime ago.

>> The mechanic who owns the repair shop remembers me because I visited his place in the past.
He kindly welcomed us.

>> He gave us a warm welcome.

While he checking our car, we went to shopping.

>> While he was checking our car, we went shopping.

Sunday is Carolyn\'s birthday So i decided to buy a present which she want to have.

>> Sunday is Carolyn\'s birthday so I decided to buy her a present which she likes.
She talked to me that she want to have big pillow.

>> She told me that she wanted to have a big pillow.
After shopping, We back to the repair shop,

>> After shopping, we went back to the repair shop.

Mechanic said there were many spot to check and repair.So I need to change additional part.

>> The mechanic said there are many parts to check and repair so I need to change some parts.
Totally, I spent twenty hundred thirty thousand won(230,000) which was almost the same price with our 2-month class.

>> In total, I spent two hundred thirty thousand won which is almost equivalent to a 2-month class with you.^^
In the evening, We met our friend who finished his military period in this year.

> >In the evening, we met our friend who finished his mandatory military service this year.
We treat him a dinner and ice cream.

>> We treated him to a nice dinner and ice cream.
It was very good time.

>> We had a very good time.^^

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