I changed my engine oil and..
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Good morning and happy Monday to you.
Thank you for sharing this with me. Sounds fun!^^ You truly had a great time with your friends.^^
I hope you will have a wonderful week then.
I do have some minor corrections and I hope you consider them.
Talk to you later.
Teacher Nina^^
In the morning of saturday, I gave Carolyn morning call.
>> Last Saturday morning, I gave Carolyn a call.
We met at 11 O\'clock,starting to go carcenter.
>> We met at 11 o\'clock and went to the car car repair shop.
Mechanic who own the repair shop remember me, because I visited this place lontime ago.
>> The mechanic who owns the repair shop remembers me because I visited his place in the past.
He kindly welcomed us.
>> He gave us a warm welcome.
While he checking our car, we went to shopping.
>> While he was checking our car, we went shopping.
Sunday is Carolyn\'s birthday So i decided to buy a present which she want to have.
>> Sunday is Carolyn\'s birthday so I decided to buy her a present which she likes.
She talked to me that she want to have big pillow.
After shopping, We back to the repair shop,
>> After shopping, we went back to the repair shop.
Mechanic said there were many spot to check and repair.So I need to change additional part.
>> The mechanic said there are many parts to check and repair so I need to change some parts.
Totally, I spent twenty hundred thirty thousand won(230,000) which was almost the same price with our 2-month class.
>> In total, I spent two hundred thirty thousand won which is almost equivalent to a 2-month class with you.^^
In the evening, We met our friend who finished his military period in this year.
> >In the evening, we met our friend who finished his mandatory military service this year.
We treat him a dinner and ice cream.
>> We treated him to a nice dinner and ice cream.
It was very good time.
>> We had a very good time.^^
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