I changed my English name.
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, when I introduce myself, I say my name.
My name used to be "Yun" in English.
Usually Korean name is hard to pronounciate for a foreigner.
So,many Koreana have English name.
As many of them doing, I had my English name as "Yun".
I thought that it was easy to remember and simple.
But, my boss said that it was too simple and short.
Moreover it is unusual.
I changed my name 1 month ago to "[이름]".
It's American name, and very usual.
One of the idol sigers, whose name is also "[이름]".
I like my new name. I hope that my English name help me make many foreign freinds ans improve my English skill.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]. Here I am once again
First of all, when I introduce myself, I say my name.
>>First of all, when I introduced myself, I said my name.My name used to be "Yun" in English.
>>correctUsually Korean name is hard to pronounciate for a foreigner.
>>Usually, Korean names are hard to pronunciate for a foreigner.So,many Koreans have English name.
>>correctAs many of them doing, I had my English name as "Yun".
>>Like many of them I had my English name as "Yun".I thought that it was easy to remember and simple.
>>correctBut, my boss said that it was too simple and short.
>>correct Moreover it is unusual.
>>correctI changed my name 1 month ago to "[이름]".>>correct
It's American name, and very usual.
>>It's an American name and it's very common. One of the idol sigers, whose name is also "[이름]".
>>One of the singing idols is named "[이름]" I like my new name.
>>correct
I hope that my English name help me make many foreign friends and improve my English skill.
>>correct
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