I changed my English name.

2010-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 lynn

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First of all, when I introduce myself, I say my name. My name used to be "Yun" in English. Usually Korean name is hard to pronounciate for a foreigner. So,many Koreana have English name. As many of them doing, I had my English name as "Yun". I thought that it was easy to remember and simple. But, my boss said that it was too simple and short. Moreover it is unusual. I changed my name 1 month ago to "[이름]". It's American name, and very usual. One of the idol sigers, whose name is also "[이름]". I like my new name. I hope that my English name help me make many foreign freinds ans improve my English skill.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]. Here I am once again   First of all, when I introduce myself, I say my name. >>First of all, when I introduced myself, I said my name.My name used to be "Yun" in English. >>correctUsually Korean name is hard to pronounciate for a foreigner. >>Usually, Korean names are hard to pronunciate for a foreigner.So,many Koreans have English name. >>correctAs many of them doing, I had my English name as "Yun". >>Like many of them I had my English name as "Yun".I thought that it was easy to remember and simple. >>correctBut, my boss said that it was too simple and short. >>correct Moreover it is unusual. >>correctI changed my name 1 month ago to "[이름]".>>correct It's American name, and very usual. >>It's an American name and it's very common. One of the idol sigers, whose name is also "[이름]". >>One of the singing idols is named "[이름]" I like my new name. >>correct I hope that my English name help me make many foreign friends and improve my English skill. >>correct

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