I choose my book to enhance my english skill.

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I randomly choose books in the internet. I am now reading it with interest and having fun with it. All I have chosen book is fiction which is endorsed by The New York Times. By this moment of saturday night as it is today I finished my English translation assignment. To translate long english paragraph is very abstruse course for me to korean. Thanks for reading. Bye... Good night.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night.


I randomly choose books in the internet.

>> I randomly choose books on the internet.


I am now reading it with interest and having fun with it.

>> CORRECT


All I have chosen book is fiction which is endorsed by The New York Times.

>> All the books that I have chosen are fiction which were endorsed by The New York Times.


By this moment of saturday night as it is today I finished my English translation assignment.

>> As of this moment, I finished my English translation assignment.


To translate long english paragraph is very abstruse course for me to korean.

>> To translate long English paragraphs is a very abstruse course for me.


Thanks for reading.
Bye...

>> CORRECT


Good night.

>> CORRECT

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