I chose it
학생이 쓴 원문
Even though I make less money, I want to live a not busy life.
I want to have more time for myself, not for work.
And I don\'t want to be a superhero that stands out to others, I want to be a wizard who works for my own satisfaction.
강사 첨삭
This is an amazing choice!! What amazing choices! :)
Even though I make less money, I want to live a not busy life.
>> Even though I make less money, I want to live a not so busy life.
I want to have more time for myself, not for work.
>> Correct.
And I don\'t want to be a superhero that stands out to others, I want to be a wizard who works for my own satisfaction.
>> And, I don\'t want to be a superhero that stands out among others, I want to be a wizard who works for my own satisfaction.
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