I consider myself as an animal lover.

You are really an animal lover, [이름].

I totally agree with your ideas below.

Because of greed, a lot of animals are endangered.

We should let them live in the Earth.

Actually, they make our lives better in simple ways.

Thanks for your nice composition and ideas.

Teacher Nina

I think I\'m a friend of animals.

>> correct

because I like annimals and worry about them.
>> correct

In these days, specially in Africa, many rino are killed because they are expensive.

>> These days, Many Rhinos are killed because they are expensive especially in Africa.
Tiger is also endangered becaus of its skin.

>> Tiger is also an endangered animal because of its skin.

It is so attractive that many people want to have it which disignate power and wealth.

>> It is so attractive that many people want to have it which designates power and wealth.
Seal is tageted by hunters in same reason.

>> Seal is targeted by hunters because of the same reason.
Sharks are killed in cruel ways that many shipmen only cut their spin and thow them into sea again. To get more money.

>> Did you mean: Sharks are killed in cruel ways that many shipmen only cut their spin and throw them into the sea again, to get more money.
Tuna is endangered too.

>> correct

they are very delicious. that is reason.

>> They are very delicious, that\'s the reason.
The desire of earning money make animals drive to demolishion or extinction.

>> The desire of earning money makes animals extinct.
We have to stop huntting annimals to earn more money, feel more fun, eat many food.
>> We have to sop hunting animals to earn more money, have more fun or eat many food.

I want to show them to very next generation. but, nothing I can do.

>> I want the next generation to see them but I can\'t do anything.
that is most saddest thing.

>> That is the saddest part.