I continue to talk about last weekend

2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1) What's the time? (It's) ten past twelve. 2) Put the CD in (Its) place, please. 3) My hometown is famous for (Its) old buildings. 4) I can't find my budgie, I think (Its) flown away. 5) Peter, (It's) never too late to learn how to play the piano. 6) The wolf made (Its) way close to our house. 7) (It's)been raining for five hours. 8) I'm interested in Denmark and (Its) people. 9) I think (It's) nice to have a dog. 10) Look at the horse! (It's) hurt its hoof. The next day, It was Monday which means I could take a rest. I got up early as usual. If I had submitted my vacation document, I wouldn't have enjoyed my time. I got a promise with old friend who have known each other for 14 years. Even we haven't seen each other, We weren't awkward. I called him and made him out. We strolled downtown where there are few people. because it's Monday~! I didn't know that there are so much space to walk around. Always I had seen was compactly occupied space with so many people

강사 첨삭

Hello, there! Wow, it is Monday!^^

I was so happy to know that you have reconnected with your friend!

How is that person now? Are there changes?^^

Does he still look young? ^^

Anyways, thanks for doing your homework!

\"It\" and \"It\'s\" can sometimes confuse us but always remember their functions.

You can get by perfectly soon!

1) What\'s the time? (It\'s) ten past twelve.

>>CORRECT!
2) Put the CD in (Its) place, please.

>>CORRECT!
3) My hometown is famous for (Its) old buildings.
>>CORRECT!

4) I can\'t find my budgie, I think (Its) flown away.
>>I can\'t find my budgie, I think it\'s flown away.

5) Peter, (It\'s) never too late to learn how to play the piano.
>>CORRECT!

6) The wolf made (Its) way close to our house.
>>CORRECT!

7) (It\'s)been raining for five hours.
>>CORRECT!

8) I\'m interested in Denmark and (Its) people.
>>CORRECT!

9) I think (It\'s) nice to have a dog.
>>CORRECT!

10) Look at the horse! (It\'s) hurt its hoof.

>>CORRECT!

The next day, It was Monday which means I could take a rest.

>> The next day is Monday which means I could take a rest.
I got up early as usual.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I rolled out of the bed early as usual.
If I had submitted my vacation document, I wouldn\'t have enjoyed my time.

>> Had I not submitted my vacation document, I wouldn\'t have enjoyed my time.
I got a promise with old friend who have known each other for 14 years.

>> I had an appointment with an old friend whom I have known for 14 years.
Even we haven\'t seen each other, We weren\'t awkward.
>>Even if we haven\'t seen each other for years, it wasn\'t an awkward meeting for us.

I called him and made him out.
>> I called him and asked him out.

We strolled downtown where there are few people.because it\'s Monday~!

>>We strolled around downtown where there are a few people because it\'s Monday~!
I didn\'t know that there are so much space to walk around.

>>I didn\'t know that there\'s so much space to walk around.
Always I had seen was compactly occupied space with so many people.

>>What I always see is a compactly occupied space with so many people.
>>What I always see is a crowded area.

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