I continue to talk about My trip
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Hi there again!
Thank you for sending in the continuation of your story about your wonderful trip. It was indeed interesting.^^
I hope you will share more about this in our class.^^
~T.Nina^^
1. a parking place / near the shops / they / find / rarely
Rarely did they find a parking place near the shops
>>They rarely find a parking place near the shops.
2. fly / with my parents / to Florida / sometimes / I / in winter
I sometimes fly to Florida in winter with my parents
>>I sometimes fly to Florida with my parents in winter.
3. often / have / at about three o\'clock / a cup of tea / they / at the hotel / in the afternoon
they often have a cup of tea in the after noon at about three o\'clock
>>They often have a cup of tea at the hotel at about three o\'clock in the afternoon.
4. hardly / last year / could / ski / he
Hardly, could he ski last year
>>He could hardly ski last year.
5. late / came / last year / she / often / to school / in spring
she often came to school late in spring
>>She often came to school late in spring last year.
I visited meusium and the house where royal familly had lived.
>>I visited the museum and the house where the royal family had lived.
and I ate the escargot which was made of snail.
>>And I ate \"escargot\" which was made of snail.
I think it was oily food.
>>I think it was an oily food.
and we strolled the streets of paris.
>>And we strolled along the streets of Paris.
It was December 31th, so there were a lot of people in the street.
>>It was December 31st, so there were a lot of people in the street.
I heard some information about Eiffel tower.
>>I heard some information about the Eiffel Tower.
It will be lighted when time is on time.
>>There will be lights around it when the clock strikes 12.
and we towarded seine river to see that in ship.
>>And we proceeded to Seine River to see the tower from a ship.^^
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