I continue to talk about My trip

2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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1. a parking place / near the shops / they / find / rarely Rarely did they find a parking place near the shops 2. fly / with my parents / to Florida / sometimes / I / in winter I sometimes fly to Florida in winter with my parents 3. often / have / at about three o'clock / a cup of tea / they / at the hotel / in the afternoon they often have a cup of tea in the after noon at about three o'clock 4. hardly / last year / could / ski / he Hardly, could he ski last year 5. late / came / last year / she / often / to school / in spring she often came to school late in spring I visited meusium and the house where royal familly had lived. and I ate the escargot which was made of snail. I think it was oily food. and we strolled the streets of paris. It was December 31th, so there were a lot of people in the street. I heard some information about Eiffel tower. It will be lighted when time is on time. and we towarded seine river to see that in ship.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again!

Thank you for sending in the continuation of your story about your wonderful trip. It was indeed interesting.^^

I hope you will share more about this in our class.^^

~T.Nina^^

 1. a parking place / near the shops / they / find / rarely
Rarely did they find a parking place near the shops
>>They rarely find a parking place near the shops.

2. fly / with my parents / to Florida / sometimes / I / in winter
I sometimes fly to Florida in winter with my parents

>>I sometimes fly to Florida with my parents in winter.
3. often / have / at about three o\'clock / a cup of tea / they / at the hotel / in the afternoon
they often have a cup of tea in the after noon at about three o\'clock

>>They often have a cup of tea at the hotel at about three o\'clock in the afternoon.
4. hardly / last year / could / ski / he
Hardly, could he ski last year

>>He could hardly ski last year.
5. late / came / last year / she / often / to school / in spring
she often came to school late in spring

>>She often came to school late in spring last year.

I visited meusium and the house where royal familly had lived.
>>I visited the museum and the house where the royal family had lived.
and I ate the escargot which was made of snail.
>>And I ate \"escargot\" which was made of snail.
I think it was oily food.
>>I think it was an oily food.
and we strolled the streets of paris.
>>And we strolled along the streets of Paris.
It was December 31th, so there were a lot of people in the street.
>>It was December 31st, so there were a lot of people in the street.
I heard some information about Eiffel tower.
>>I heard some information about the Eiffel Tower.
It will be lighted when time is on time.
>>There will be lights around it when the clock strikes 12.
and we towarded seine river to see that in ship.

>>And we proceeded to Seine River to see the tower from a ship.^^

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