I couldn't go outside because of the yellow dust.
학생이 쓴 원문
My husband and I planned to go picnic,but we couldn't go.
It was the yellow dust warning on last weekend.
The yellow dust is the wind from the east side of China to Korea in the spring season.
There are many factories and dessert in east side of China, so the yellow dust causes many problems like a respiritory disease.
We took a rest at home, and even didn't open windows.
When we saw ouside through the window, it seemed to cover the window glasses with yellow cellophan.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I heard that yellow dusts are really dangerous to people’s health..
Some people wear masks when they are outside..
Too bad you weren’t able to go on a picnic but don’t worry, there would still be another day..^^
My husband and I planned to go picnic,but we couldn't go.>> My husband and I planned to go on a picnic, but we couldn't go.
It was the yellow dust warning on last weekend. >> There was a yellow dust warning last weekend.
The yellow dust is the wind from the east side of China to Korea in the spring season.>> The yellow dust is carried by the wind from the east side of China to Korea in the spring season.There are many factories and dessert in east side of China, so the yellow dust causes many problems like a respiritory disease.>> There are many factories and dessert on the east side of China, so the yellow dust causes many problems like respiratory diseases.We took a rest at home, and even didn't open windows.
>> We took a rest at home, and didn't even open the windows.
When we saw ouside through the window, it seemed to cover the window glasses with yellow cellophan.
>> When we looked outside through the window, it seemed that the window glasses were covered with yellow cellophane.
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