I`d like that you or manager give me a topic.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was suprised with white black.
I didn`t know that I can start from where.
So, this composition like dialougue looks so poor.
Anyway, I like my teacher who is same old with me.
Nice meet to you.
강사 첨삭
Hello Se Il!
It's so nice to meet you too. I had fun talking to you and I'm looking forward to our next discussion. You have a wonderful evening ahead!
TOPIC: YOUR DREAM JOB!
Monica
I was suprised with white black.
>>>I was surprised with black and white.I didn`t know that I can start from where.
>>>I didn't know that I can start from here.So, this composition like dialougue looks so poor.>>>This composition seems incorrectAnyway, I like my teacher who is same old with me.
>>>Anyway, I like my teacher who has same age as I am.Nice meet to you.
>>>Nice to meet you
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