I'd like to correct my resume

Hello [이름],

And finally.....

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I define the growth phase of engineer as 3Ps.

>>I define the growth phase of an engineer as 3Ps.
First of all, Possibility, knowledge bases of theory through undergraduate studies was basis of my infinite possibilities.

>>First of all, Possibility, knowledge based on theory through undergraduate studies was the basis of my infinite possibilities.

Second, Practiced, I could build a wide range of practical experience for 38 months at laboratory.

>>Second, Practice, I build a wide range of practical experiences for 38 months at the laboratory.

Third, Professional, I got a deeper knowledge and expertise through advanced learning in the Master’s program.

>>correct!
Based on this 3P compentence, as FA enginner with passion and pride, I would like to walk towards spectacular growth with ASML.
>>Based on this 3Ps competencies, as FA engineer with passion and pride, I would like to walk towards a spectacular growth with ASML.
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I\'m so sorry that I ask about this kind of request..

>>correct!