I'd like to go.....
학생이 쓴 원문
Where would you like to go for an adventure; a jungle, a desert, a small island or a city? Why? How will you make that vacation memorable?
First of all, I like adventure.
but I hope there is safe place.
I saw the English program, Man vs Wild which is famous for reality program.
I was shocked when I saw that program first time.
In that program, One man showed up and He must survive in the dangerous condition.
When it comes to survive, He is the best man in the world.
He ate scorpion in the desert. even he caught it without gloves or other instrument.
and He squeeze elephant's dung to get water.
He caught fish in the belly with hands. He cut the animals skin to survive in cold weather.
I saw every place where I want to go.
and I became aware about the true danger in nature.
I appreciate him to teach it.
but I don't feel like doing that things.
I satisfy with watching it. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Oh! I know that television program! I like it, there is also a program before that I am really interested in the title was Fear Factor. I hope that you can still watch it. It\'s really great! Tell me more about this tomorrow in class! See you!
Teacher Nina
Where would you like to go for an adventure; a jungle, a desert, a small island or a city? Why? How will you make that vacation memorable?First of all, I like adventure.
>> Correct!but I hope there is safe place.
>> But I hope that there is a safe place to have an adventure.I saw the English program, Man vs Wild which is famous for reality program.
>> I saw an English program tittled Man vs Wild, which is a famous reality program.I was shocked when I saw that program first time.
>> I was shcoked when I saw that program for the first time.In that program, One man showed up and He must survive in the dangerous condition.
>> In that program, a man showed up and he must survive from a dangerous situation.When it comes to survive, He is the best man in the world.
>> When it comes to survival, he is the best man in the world.He ate scorpion in the desert. even he caught it without gloves or other instrument.
>> He ate scorpions in the desert even if he caught it without gloves or other instrument.and He squeeze elephant\'s dung to get water.
>> and he squeezed an elephant\'s dung to get water.He caught fish in the belly with hands.
>> He caught a fish in the belly with bare hands.
He cut the animals skin to survive in cold weather.
>> He cut the animal\'s skin to survive in the cold weather.I saw every place where I want to go.
>> Correct!and I became aware about the true danger in nature.
>> and I became more aware about the true danger in nature.I appreciate him to teach it.
>> I appreciate his teachings.
>> OR: I appreciate his tactics.but I don\'t feel like doing that things.
>> But I don\'t feel like doing those things.I satisfy with watching it. ^^
>> I am satisfied watching it.
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