I\'d rather have more money.
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'d rather have more money. because even if i have much time, there is nothing to do without money.
i think that \'no money no honey\'. i want to be a rich that doesn\'t have a job. then i\'ll do world tour with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]. Thank you for your homework. I appreciate you making an effort to do it. I agree with most of what you said but it seems we need both, don\'t you think?^^ Let\'s talk again on Monday. Have a great weekend! ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I\'d rather have more money. because even if i have much time, there is nothing to do without money.
>>> I would rather have more money because even if I have much time but no money, I cannot do anything without money.
i think that \'no money no honey\'.
>>> I agree with the saying, \"No money, no honey.\"
i want to be a rich that doesn\'t have a job. then i\'ll do world tour with my friends.
>>> I want to be rich so I would not need a job then I will go on a world tour with my friends.
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