I deferred class on monday because of business trip

2020-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I went to JINJU city in Korea at monday because business trip. so I defered Monday class. Position of my meeting was hospital that cured coronavirus-19. I was afraid of infection... It\'s a living. It was far from JINJU City. It was about 300 km one way. I drove my car. I was very tired .

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir Jon. Thank you for this. I hope you\'ll find time to rest after that meeting. Keep your immunity strong as well. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I went to JINJU city in Korea at monday because business trip.
>>> I went to JINJU city in Korea at Monday because of a business trip.
so I defered Monday class.
>>>  So I deferred Monday\'s class.  
Position of my meeting was hospital that cured coronavirus-19.
>>> Th location of my meeting was in a hospital that cured coronavirus-19 patients.
I was afraid of infection...
>>>  correct  
It\'s a living.
>>> correct  
>>> OR: It\'s a part of my living. 
It was far from JINJU City. 
>>> correct   
It was about 300 km one way.
>>> correct  
>>> OR: I was about 300 km for a one-way drive.
I drove my car. 
>>>  correct  
I was very tired .
>>>  correct  

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