I did my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher sheila.
I do my homework.
Task is what are some ways I do to practice my English skills.
I have to check your feedback on internet because it was written my mistake, and I have to repeatedly speak revision sentences.
Also, I always think about make a sentence. So when I usually communicated with other people using Korean, I have to think about how can express English.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! I enjoyed reading your homework today!
For now, I think that you can speak as much as you want to regardless of making mistakes.
Remember, mistakes are welcomed in my class. I think that would be your avenue to practice your English.
I think, we need to build more of your confidence in speaking English. Don\'t be shy and don\'t be afraid.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I do my homework.
>>CORRECT
Task is what are some ways I do to practice my English skills.
>>The task is to put some ways that I do to practice my English skills.
I have to check your feedback on internet because it was written my mistake, and I have to repeatedly speak revision sentences.
>>I have to check your feedback on the internet because my mistakes are written there and I have to repeat the revised sentences.
Also, I always think about make a sentence.
>>Also, I always think about making a sentence.
So when I usually communicated with other people using Korean, I have to think about how can express English.
>>So, when I usually communicate with other people using Korean, I have to think about how I can express it in English.
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