I did my homework after a long time
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What are your plane on your vacation?
- Well.. Maybe I think I’m going to HongChen in Korea. I’ll try to travel with my girlfriend again.
And I will drink with my brother and father!
And then I will watch the movie tomorrow!
2. What are the most important things your parents taught you?
- My father emphasize to me that you have to the positive mind. Anyway I want to learn from you everyday!
Thank you
강사 첨삭
1. What are your plane on your vacation?
- Well.. Maybe I think I’m going to HongChen in Korea.
>> CORRECT
I’ll try to travel with my girlfriend again.
>> CORRECT
And I will drink with my brother and father!
>> CORRECT
And then I will watch the movie tomorrow!
>> And I will watch a movie tomorrow.
2. What are the most important things your parents taught you?
- My father emphasize to me that you have to the positive mind.
>> My father emphasized that I need to have a positive way of thinking.
Anyway I want to learn from you everyday!
kkkkk you can do it! :D
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