I did my homework again!
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Hello Seo Yeong! Thank you for answering your homework again! Keep it up! See you later! (^^,)
Actually, these days my life is packed with works and studies.
>>> Actually, these days my life is packed with a lot of work and studies.
So I don\'t have time to feel bored!
>>> CORRECT!
But sometimes I feel like I\'m stuck in a rut.
>>> CORRECT!
Moreover, I think it\'s a common emotion or maybe the phenomenon that every Korean woman can feel.
>>> Moreover, I think it\'s a common emotion or maybe the phenomenon that every Korean woman feels.
Especially, it\'s about pressure.
>>> CORRECT!
Because of male-centric society, Korean women have lots of unspoken regulations.
>>> CORRECT!
To come over those regulations and achieve the goals that they want,
>>> CORRECT!
Women have to work harder and make their ability better than man.
>>> CORRECT!
This pressure is also made by competitive society and confines meaningless action.
>>> CORRECT!
Some Korean women, so misinterpret a rest as a meaningless action.
>>> Some Korean women, misinterpret rest as a meaningless action.
I was one of them. I abused myself and sometimes blamed myself.
>>> CORRECT!
After lots of trials, I found a way to solve my inner pressure.
>>> CORRECT!
To prevent mental and physical exhaustion, I write a diary.
>>> CORRECT!
Writing a diary keeps my emotion healthy so I can make sound self-reflection.
>>> CORRECT!
Now it\'s a really important method to set my path and make a conversation with myself.
>>> CORRECT!
_T MICHELLE_
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